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5 mistakes to avoid – Galapagos Tours

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If you are considering a visit to the Galapagos Islands, you are in for a treat. Made famous by Charles Darwin’s Voyage of the Beagle in the 19 Century, the islands located 972 km west of mainland Ecuador in the Pacific Ocean. Undiscovered is relatively new to humankind, you will see a fantastic array of flora and fauna in the ecosystems that exist nowhere else on the planet to see.

The vast majority of tourists arriving by plane in Galapagos. It is only possible for the islands, which reached by a flight from mainland Ecuador from Quito or Guayaquil. International flights are not directly to the islands. If you are flying, make sure that your seat is not given to someone else by:

See more than an hour before the start

tarpaulins international arrival in Ecuador at least one day before your departure flight on the Galapagos, to give you time between the connections (or if you are starting your cruise to miss no opportunity to catch up!)

conservation on the islands is of paramount importance, and the best people adhere to the standards that guide. They should help you to stay on marked trails and to help to communicate and enforce the conservation rules.

Galapagos Islands visitors should be led by a qualified person. In your group should not exceed 16 persons, to enable proper monitoring and guidance for tourists. You should also give you information about the general safety of the water and supervise all swimming and diving.

It is tempting, but visitors should not interact with the animals on the Galapagos Islands. The majority of animals in the Galapagos have no reason to fear man, and therefore it will provide visitors to an end without screwing seen.

However, you should go to more than two feet of animals, as they will follow in some cases, leave their nests discovered, exposing eggs or chicks in the sun. In addition, no animals are fed or bait on the water or soil.

presentation of exotic organisms to Galapagos could devastating effects on ecosystems that exist in a state of delicate balance. All foods, animal and plant and seed, plants or fresh flowers can should check before leaving the airport in Quito or Guayaquil to a qualified auditor, whether they are safe or not declared. Any form of live animals are not allowed.

The same rules apply for tours between the islands, each island is a unique ecosystem, meetings between the islands can be just as devastating to the natural course of things, the parts of the mainland

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5) fire to light
In 1985, Isabel Iceland suffered severe damage from the negligence of a small amount of smoke and fire. Curiously, in 1994, almost a decade later, the same thing happens. Even if a fire on the beach seems the perfect ending for a day on an exotic island adventure, visitors must resist the temptation to build a campfire.

Are there other things to prevent the visitors to the Galapagos islands? What are your experiences Galapagos vacation?

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Could you plz check my writing for any mistakes and awkward expressions?

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Question: Could you plz check my writing for any mistakes and awkward expressions?
it’s part of the website content.
(I’m non-native)


Established XXX Corporation
Awarded US$ 1million Export Tower on the 36th Trade Day
Established branch office in Hong Kong
Moved to a new building in XXX


Job Category: Overseas Sales & Sales Support (0~10 years)
Requirements: Bachelor’s degree
Preferred Qualification: Degree in Chemistry/Chemical Engineering
TOEIC score over 900
Good communication skills in English and Chinese


* Overseas Training Opportunities
1st year – On-site training at overseas branch offices (5~10 days)
2nd year – Attending International conference (1~2 /year)
10th year –Short term study abroad program for your children
* Cash gift and holidays for congratulations and condolences
* Private health Insurance
* Tuition assistance for foreign language courses
* Oak Valley Resort Membership
* Fitness Center Membership
* Support for cultural & social activities
* 5 working days a week, 5 days vacation from 2st year

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Thanks a lot for your help in advance.
To B K : Thanks for ur quick and kind answer. All ur suggestions sound good.

* ‘Export Tower’ is a prize given by Korean government.
* My company, ALBA Corporation is established on Jan.,1999.
short term international health insurance

Best answer:

Answer by B K
Most are OK. A few are suspect and don’t make much sense to me. Not sure how you should correct them because it’s not obvious what you mean.

Established XXX Corporation (Did you mean to say Established as a corporation on a particular date?)

10th year –Short term study abroad program for your children (I think you mean “foreign study programme” or “overseas study programme).

Awarded US$ 1million Export Tower on the 36th Trade Day (I have no idea what this is about)

Cash gift and holidays for congratulations and condolences (Did you mean bonuses and compassionate leave? Maternity and paternity leave?).

5 working days a week, 5 days vacation from 2st year. (Try this instead: Five working days per week. Five days vacation from 2nd year)

EDIT: Thanks for the extra info. OK, try these instead:

Estabilished as a corporation in 1999

Awarded the Export Tower prize (US$ 1 million) on the 36th day of trading.

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