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Question: Im writing a book? opinions please?
the book i am writing is about:
Anna Nelson has long blonde hair, crystal blue eyes and a smile that can light up the darkest room. She has a good sense of humor, good grades and always seems to know what to say. Anna seems to be good at everything. Her mother is a lawyer, her father is a doctor and she’s an only child. Anna is responsible and has her priorities in order.

Brooke King has long deep red locks, icy blue eyes and fair skin. She, too, is a beauty. Brooke seems to care too much about the surface. Her popularity, her clothes, her hair, her looks…but sometimes you can catch the deep side of her. Brooke has lived with her foster mother since she was a baby. They are very close and she too, is an only child. Her grades are always meticulous, but she does her best to keep them average.

Jade Collins is milano with black wavy hair and emerald green eyes. Jade is constantly on a coffee high. She’s very nice, loves to talk and is very sociable. Her best quality is her people person skills. She has an African American mother and a Caucasian father. Her parents spoil her rotten and are madly in love; unlike most kids’ parents these days. She has an older brother who’s in college and living at home.

Bridget Price has thick brown straight hair, chocolate brown eyes and freckles lightly scattered across her nose. Bridget is plenty outgoing when she’s with her friends but she gets very shy around other people. She’s a middle child; she has a younger sister and an older sister. She feels so average and plain. She has to learn that she’s not average at all; she’s one of a kind.

The four girls live in Seattle, Washington where everyone has money coming out of their rear ends. The houses are large, the people are rich and beautiful. They have been best friends since second grade when they were all put into Mrs. Mullin’s class. They just graduated their private junior high school and are now moving into their freshman year of the real thing. They are very pretty and very popular.

Anna, who has always appeared so perfect, even to her best friends, happens to have a dirty little secret. Her father had an affair. Her parents are getting a divorce. Anna doesn’t know what to do. Her father is leaving, her mother is having a melt down and she’s trying to keep the secret safe.
Meanwhile, Anna is sensing a strange hostility towards her from Brooke lately. They all know that Brooke has always been jealous of her but it seems to be getting out of control. Jade senses that something is wrong with Anna and won’t let it go. Anna notices that Bridget has her eye on a guy, which is a big thing for her. She’s never had a boyfriend. Anna wants to help Bridget come out of her shell.
Their lives may seem perfect from a distance, but up close you see that its not everything it’s cracked up to be.

and this is what i have so far:
Chapter One
I set down my brush and took a look in my vanity mirror in my personal bathroom. My golden blonde naturally pin-straight hair fell a little past my shoulders. My crystal blue eyes popped with black eyeliner and mascara. Perfect. My outfit consisted of a pair of tight dark wash skinny jeans, a white sweetheart neck camisole and bright yellow sandals. Perfect.
I thought about my three best friends. Shy Bridget would be freaking out right now. Jade would be doing the opposite. She would be gulping down cups of coffee and jumping around with excitement. And Brooke would have been up at the crack of dawn to get ready for our first day of our junior year of high school. I grabbed my big yellow Paul Roberts bag off my bed and headed down the white plush stairs.
My father was sitting at the island in our kitchen, eating breakfast and reading the news on his laptop. I pulled out a barstool next to my dad and threw my purse on the granite countertop. “Good morning,” he said.
“Morning. Where’s mom?”
“Upstairs getting ready for work.”
Our housekeeper, Tasha, set a plate of pancakes down in front of me. “Thanks, Tasha,” I said.
“You’re welcome, Anna.”
“So, are you nervous?” My father asked.
“Not really,” I said. “What’s there to be nervous about?”
My dad smiled. “Good attitude.”
“Mhmm hmm,” I mumbled with my mouth full of pancakes.
My father was a doctor and my mother was a lawyer. They were high school sweethearts and continued dating off and on all through college. When they finished college they were in the “on” and they moved in together. They got married after a year and had me. Then they moved to our big house in Seattle, Washington. I’ve lived in this house my entire life. Dorothy was right. There’s no place like home.
My father finished his breakfast and grabbed his brief case. “Well, have a good first day,” he said, kissing me on the cheek.
“Kay, see you later.”
My mother came flouncing down the stairs just as I heard my father’s car start. “Hey sweetie.” My mother and I looked so much alike it was like lo
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Best answer:

Answer by Jessica
i love it! it kinda reminds me of pretty little liars. i love books like that.. its great!